12th Mar 2010

Can you please kindly rate my poem? ?

  • Most of these aspiring moments turn into freshness,
    Over and beyond my imagination of wholesome glory,
    Many times just pondering upon the eternity of love,
    Every minute becomes more to cherish in silence and joy,
    Never to forget the majestic flow of thoughts that run in me,
    These are the beautiful days that anyone would long for,
    Soundness - just a wonderful feeling when you're besides mother nature.

    I wrote this poem write now in less than 3 minutes. If you combine the first letter of each line, you'll see the word "Moments".

    How much would you give it out of 10?


  • wow.that is very beautiful
    could i use it for a poem for school?? please.if not then i wont use it ")


  • -(negative)10000000000000000000000000000...


  • When compared to your yahoo contemporaries, I give it a 5.
    When to actual poetry a 1.
    Brevity of forethought is an illegitimate excuse for mediocrity.


  • As I ponder beauty in nature with inspiring thoughts from above
    A joyous refraim from the silence whispers gently, eternal love


  • AC Telsa is completely right. Don't be discouraged by it either. Nobody who has any sense of poetry will ever take the time frame in which you wrote something into consideration. It's a nonexistent factor for the reader. Keep writing and READING and put your ego away for awhile.


  • that was sooo Beautiful I love how it spells moments
    it is a 1000000


  • thats really cool...i would give it a 9 1/2 ExCeLlEnT (:


  • A 4.5.
    Does not make a lot of sense to me.







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